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Well, here he is, my Talmi OC, in all his poorly drawn glory. Actually it went better than I thought, since it was my first try. Of all parts of the body, I do the worst on lower arms, lower legs, hands and feet. I managed to pull off some of the legs and arms and hands, but since I overcomplicated the parts with cybernetics, it was hard, and I didn’t finish the feet, since they got these need claws that aid in certain scenarios which I’ll explain later.

He’s not wearing his regular stuff, but a Star Org uniform modified to accommodate his ‘handicap’. This is cause I still hope to have him in a cameo in Last res0rt, so I drew him as he would appear. The button on the beret doesn’t mean anything, they all have different ones, but I don’t know what they mean so I picked a style and stuck it on.
I’m gonna try to color it later, put in his grey fur, darker stripes, and the corny blue and green uniform. And the scars, he’s got a couple of those.

And he’s not normally mad, but a certain convict with a goatee made a crack about the Talmi minding their place in society, so that blastcannon (basically a supped up shotgun) stands a REALLY good chance of getting used.

Personal Stats:
Rank, Name: Field Officer Shinjzo Venkra
Species: Talmi
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Fur color: light grey
Stripe color: dark grey
Generally easy going, he’s touchy when people dare to continue to look down on the Talmi, and has no qualms about teaching them a lesson or two about the ‘inferiority’ of his race.

Weapon Proficiency:
Heavy weapons: low average
Assault weapons: average
Sub Assault: high (a combination of assault and submachine, like the MP 7)
Shotgun: high
Sniper: High (mostly on semi-auto, poor for singleshot)
Pistol: average
Submachinegun: below average
Rocket: poor
Melee: high(cybernetic parts certainly help)
His weapon capability is scattered, he’s not a marksman, but in certain areas he can pull more than his weight. Shotguns and blastcannons are a good choice for CQC, with SubAssault being his preferred primary. Sniper is a bit different than most. He hates the singleshot versions that most marksman prefer, but with semi-auto models he shines, cause if he misses the first shot, he’ll most likely hit the second, though he’s not so good at headshots unless he spends quite a bit of time lining up the shot, but the bullet WILL hit somewhere. His cybernetic parts ensure high melee ability and durability. He can survive a direct stab in the heart due to his being replaced with an armored artificial one. His lungs are artificial as well, allowing for him to survive many hostile environments, but it has to be pressurized and have oxygen, and some poisons still make it through, and he still has to avoid bio-infected areas. His cybernetic parts allow for hidden surprises, the most commonly used is heavy metal claws that extend out, both for melee and allowing for climbing and such. Overall I say good luck to those fool enough to try to challenge him.

Bio: He’s not as much of a heartless killer as one forced into that position. He comes from a boarderland world, and at age 7 was forced to become a child soldier by insurgents against his will. At age 10 he got his revenge, secretly hiding bombs across the facility then detonating them taking most of the insurgents with it. He joined an independent freedom fighter corps afterwards, and moved from one to another as he could working to bring down the crime lords, pirates, slavers, and other organizations that keep the Talmi race in their lower position in the galaxy. He hates killing, but will continue to fight as long as he has to in order to ensure the betterment of his people. He ‘earned’ his cybernetic lower legs from a landmine, and his arms as a result of being imprisoned by an angry crime lord.

After the collapse of the Talmi Combat Corps he joined the Star Org, but not for the reason that most people join. The Star Org keep their reasons for hiring him quiet as well, due to their not wanting people to realize their reasons. He fights for the pay, with a significant amount of it going to a fund to revive the Corps. His lack of any dedication to their cause beyond the pay is the reason for his keeping quiet, and the fact he was hired to boost the kill count is the reason for the Org keeping quiet. Rather than pretend loyalty to the cause, or show his lack thereof, he just keeps quiet, earning him a passive reputation.

His transfer to security for the Last res0rt reality show isn’t his normal M.O. but he works it to ensure that the Talmi led team isn’t mistreated, and to keep an eye on several of those affiliated with organizations he holds a grudge against.

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Something I forgot, it's kinda important.

He has no preconceptions of the Cestial, undead, redead, dead inside, or any others. His total experience consisted of having to deal with a couple of zombies on a mission, but beyond that he hasn't really dealt with any. As such, he holds no special respect for the celestial, nor does he hold a grudge for the dead inside, though he doesn't really understand either one. Basically, if it can move under its own power, it's alive, if not, it's dead. If it wants him dead, it's bad, if not, it's not. I've left other stuff out, and i'll post another edit when i remember what it was.

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i forgot his tail, now i feel like a noob T.T

Talmi belong to Last res0rt
Shinjzo belongs to me
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Ah-hah! So this is your cameo OC. Interesting backstory, I feel sorry for the poor guy. :( Although the resulting cybernetics should provide some seriously cool fight scenes.

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at best he gets to show up twice, there's no guarantee he's actually gonna fight, but he certainly would do well in one. Jason Spades is most likely candidate for getting pwnd, with Slick coming in a close second.

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Well, it'll be fun to see him show up no matter what he ends up doing. Congrats!

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thanx, you thinking of trying to get in?

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Hmm, I'm not totally sure but probably not. Although it does sound pretty fun.

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yes it does ^_^

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~dragongirl63 Nov 22, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
Cool!

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^_^ let slavers beware

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lol indeed

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have you seen the comic this is based on?

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